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Section B:
Mean: 28.57
Median: 25
High: 42
Section A:
Mean: 31.28
Median: 30
High: 40
Specific Point: Read § 1332(a)(2) carefully. It does not say that a foreign citizen with a green card is deemed a citizen of the state in which he is domiciled for all cases. The statute used to say that; Congress amended in 2011 because it raised potential Art. III problems. The statute nowsays that § 1332(a)(2) does not apply to an action between a citizen of a state and a green-card holder domiciled in the same state, even though it is between a citizen of a state and a foreign citizen. The green-card holder remains a citizen or subject of a foreign state for all other purposes. An 9action between a citizen of a state and a green-card holder domiciled in a different state would be between a citizen of a state and a citizen/subject of a foreign state under (a)(2) (were the latter "deemed" a citizen of a state, jurisdiction would shift in this action to (a)(1), which is how it operated under the former statute). And for (a)(3) purposes, we do not care at all about the foreign subject's immigration status.
General Point: Any essay must begin with the motion or thing you are asked to address. This question asked the court to decide the Motion for Remand. The first thing to explain is what removal is and what a motion to remand is. That then takes you into timeliness and jurisdiction and all the stuff you want to talk about. But it makes no sense to jump right to what jurisdiction is or whether the motion is timely without giving the context for why you are discussing jurisdiction and the timing of the motion.

