As we are four essays in, I want to provide a few comments and highlight some things.
• I do not care what conclusion you reach if you are asked to decide the motion as the court. I do expect a certain legal framework to be used to resolve that motion. So there is not "one right answer that Prof. Wasserman wants." There may be (and probably is) one right analytical framework. Obviously, if you are told to argue one side or the other, the "right" answer is whatever position you have been told to argue.
• Know your assigned role. If you are told to resolve the motion as the court, your answer should say that the motion is granted or denied, not that it "should be" granted to denied. This is part of following directions.
• You must get into factual specifics. To use the most recent essays, it is not enough to say "the pleading was timely." You must give the facts (the relevant dates) that show it is timely, This is one example; it is a common problem.
• You must explain why a rule applies before explaining and applying it. Sometimes that includes a factual predicate bringing the rule into play; you must explain why that predicate is met. For example, there is no need to discuss relation back unless the amended pleading is untimely. That means that before you introduce and discuss relation back, you must explain whether and why the amended pleading is untimely and thus why you are even discussing relation back.
• Similarly, where there are two possible rules governing an issue, you must explain why you chose to apply one or the other. For example, two rules provide a standard for relation back--15(c)(1)(B) and 15(c)(1)(C). Explain why you choose to apply one or the other. And explaining that why may help you avoid picking the wrong rule.
• Be careful about vomiting rules--reciting random rules without explaining why they are in play and why you are discussing them. Consider how rules fit together and discuss that connection, where appropriate, as part of your RE.
• Read the facts of each case carefully. Don't assume it calls for the precise analysis we discussed in class, as opposed to application of the same rules to a slightly different legal or factual situation or context.